I look around and all I see is changes
Same old story, just new faces
The plot I know, but new people and places
Things have changed锘縝ut that's how hate is
Things have changed but its not for the better
My heroes are dead, and they're only getting deader
We forgot about all about the Tupacs and the B.I.G.檚
swapped em for soulja boys and whack emcees
We need to all talk about positivity
and maybe someday you can all stand wit me
On this ladder I stand preachin from above
Angels have been reached
When push comes to shove
See me as a brotha show some love
Lifes a long a rode
I'm at the wheel wheelin
Didn檛 rob a store
Ya its hearts that I'm stealin
Got a life sentence
Stole the hearts of a million
Lifes a path that we all chose to walk
But we got all these gangs from block to block
Our lives just keep winding down
No stopwatch check the clock
So I look around and all I see is changes
Brand new houses
Brand new spaces
But more gangs
Just more strangers
We gota make changes in this life we hold
My younger brother was taken at the age of 3 months old
All my mistakes
I live and I learn
So as long as I tried I'm not really concerned
The sky檚 the limit
Although Heavens far away
We can all reach it from changes we make today
Tired of all the drug dealin and all the car jackin
Glocks around every corner heat檚 bein packin
You say youll do fine
Cause your strapped with your nine
Commit that crime and you think your some kind of hero
Take a glock and bust a shot BAM your just a zero
Make these changes find an inspiration
Instead of actin on rage without hesitation
Get locked up with no explanation
Like half the population
Changes you make will grant motivation
Light a new spark for the new generationRate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?I didn't like %26quot;My heroes are dead and they're only getting deader%26quot;. Maybe %26quot;my heroes are dying%26quot;.
I didn't like %26quot;Things have changed but that's how hate is%26quot;, with the rest of the piece being positive. Maybe %26quot;....that's how fate is.%26quot;
I'd leave the whole %26quot;wheel wheelin'%26quot; and stealing hearts stanza off. It's fake and drags badly.
Instead of making the same image twice with %26quot;Glocks on every corner, heat's bein' packin'%26quot;, I'd change the first part to %26quot;Thugs watchin' corners and heat's bein' packin'%26quot;. You use %26quot;Glock%26quot; later anyway.
Make it %26quot;Bust a shot from the Glock and you'll end up a zero%26quot;.
Change %26quot;Get locked up%26quot; lines to %26quot;Get locked in the cage with no explanation, down on your luck like half the population%26quot;, which rhymes the rest of that first line and produces the same meter.
I give the idea a 9.Rate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?niceRate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?Good, what is your title?Rate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?i really like it the problem is i dont know the tune to itRate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?wow that amaziing! how old are youu?Rate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?wow thats awesome! sad, but really goodRate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?Wow im impressed,, the lyrics have a lot of feeling or reallness to them,, i think u did really good :DRate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?10!!!!!
You wrote these? If you did you need to get a contract with someone. This is an awesome piece!,
Believe it or not, I was trying to put a tune to the lyrics using the famous Right Round by FlorRida. lolRate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?Good but damn the negative vibe i feel from you.Rate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?=') Beautiful! It remembers me to a personal experience! Awesome! ('=
You're an awesome song writer...hope you could write more! I LOVE IT!Rate my lyrics please? easy 10 points?Thats deep! I love It!!! good job!
