Thursday, September 22, 2011

Is this a good song LYRICS?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NGql1U6GZ…

^CLICK IT AND THEN READ BELOW WHILE YOU%26#039;RE LISTENING.







Oookay so well I hate my singing, extremely.

But everytime I post lyrics on here to get feedback,

people always ask to hear the song.



So, I recorded myself singing it.

I know my voice is horrible, so I%26#039;d like more feedback on the LYRICS.

OH YEAH AND SORRY FOR THE PART I MESS UP, AHAH!

How is my singing though.. like, what should I try to change?



LYRICS:

i%26#039;m tired of being the good person

in all of these problems

tired of trying to work this out

tired of getting you to settle down



and he%26#039;s, he%26#039;s looking at me

and i%26#039;m looking at him,

no this can%26#039;t be the end

no this isn%26#039;t it, oh no,

this can%26#039;t be it



now he%26#039;s screaming

%26quot;you never loved me, did you?%26quot;

and now baby, i must confess

i loved you when you were true and

you never wanted to be tied down

i guess i%26#039;m not the girl you want after, all

he%26#039;s grabbing his coat muttering to himself

i don%26#039;t understand why i put myself through this hell

(through this hell, through this hell)



you%26#039;re kidding me right? you%26#039;re always gone at night

i don%26#039;t know who you are when you%26#039;re lying right next to me (next to me)

i%26#039;m tired of all your lies, all your lies

tired of all your excuses if you never wanted to be with me then why did you waste your time here?



and he%26#039;s, he%26#039;s looking at me

and i%26#039;m looking at him,

no this can%26#039;t be the end

no this isn%26#039;t it, oh no,

it can%26#039;t be it



and now i%26#039;m screaming

%26quot;you never notice me, do you?%26quot;

and he%26#039;s looking at me, half undressed

i noticed you when you were less nervous

less reserved, and i guess you lead me on

i guess i%26#039;m not the guy you want after, all

give it up, let go, this isn%26#039;t how, it should go down

and i%26#039;m throwing his shoes at him screaming

%26quot;get out now, it shouldn%26#039;t take you this long, you%26#039;re always gone, god you%26#039;ve got practice, at this%26quot;



and he%26#039;s throwing his shoes on his feet and stumbling to find his car keys

while i%26#039;m sitting on the couch wishing i%26#039;d never met him

and he%26#039;s tripping over his own two feet and nervously looking at me and

i%26#039;m trying to pretend that i actually want this to end

(like i actually want this to end)



and he%26#039;s, he%26#039;s looking at me

and i%26#039;m looking at him,

no this can%26#039;t be the end

no this isn%26#039;t it, oh no,

this isn%26#039;t it



and now he%26#039;s running over to me

and wrapping his arms around me

%26quot;baby i never want to fight with you again, tell me that you%26#039;ll try us again%26quot;

and so i let my tears fall, i knew i never should have loved him at all

but i just can%26#039;t let go just yet, no this won%26#039;t be the end

and the taste of him at my fingertips while i%26#039;m kissing his two lips

and i never want to see his face again but i just can%26#039;t let go

i should have known, i should have known, oh, oh

but i can%26#039;t just let go, i can%26#039;t just let go



and now he%26#039;s taking his shoes off again

telling me, he%26#039;ll never leave me alone and

and i%26#039;m telling him i%26#039;ll be more fun and

i%26#039;ll try not to get worked up and i%26#039;ll be the best i can be

he whispers, %26quot;baby you%26#039;re good enough for me%26quot;



and he%26#039;s, he%26#039;s looking at me

and i%26#039;m looking at him,

no this can%26#039;t be the end

no this isn%26#039;t it, oh no,

this isn%26#039;t it



(AS OF 3:33pm eastern, the video is still being processed, but it is still about the same as I intended.)Is this a good song LYRICS?you could have voice lessons.Is this a good song LYRICS?The lyrics are good. And the song would sound a whole lot better if it had instruments and a beat in the background obviously. Good luck and good job! =]Is this a good song LYRICS?good!
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